For me the introduction and main part of "Above the Clouds" was disconnected - I liked both pieces but am not sure they work well together - or certainly not with the big gap between them. What was your thinking behind putting both pieces together as it would be helpful to understand that. If there is a particular reason they might stay together with a bit of work but both pieces could definitely be developed separately. Like I said, I'm not a musician.
P355 V01 Above the Clouds.mp3